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It was a dark night in London. The streets were filled with drinkers and drunkards, along with a few policemen. A boy, the age 19, walked around freely, a hat covering his crimson colored eyes. He was heading towards a mansion, one in Whitechapel. He was close to it.

He wasn't scared. He may have believed in Jack the Ripper, but the killer only went after women. And while he did look somewhat feminine with his short ponytail and full lashes, it was obvious from his outfit - a white button up, a blood red tie and a brown vest under a long midnight black waistcoat with black slacks and shoes - he was male.

The boy found his way to the mansion door. It was a few feet taller than his own mansion, nothing special. He knocked on the door gently, there was no need for harshness, the knock would echo in the large building. The door opened and he was met with a girl with short brown hair dressed in pure red - he thought it complemented her mahogany eyes.

"Who are you?" the woman asked.

"Len Kagamine, detective," he answered neutrally.

"Ah, you're the one he requested. Come." The woman opened the door a little wider and let him in, the brightness of the chandelier almost blinding him. That would take some getting used to.

"I'm sure he would want you to relax. Nothing has happened yet."

"I'm fine with that."

Len would've ventured farther into the foyer, but a gasp halted his movements. He turned around to meet the gaze of a another woman, certainly younger than the last, with long cyan locks that almost touched the floor. She looked at him with a worried expression, then pointed to his left arm. Or, absence of.

"Ah, you noticed. It was cut off years ago, nothing of importance. But since you did point out my missing appendage, may you please tell me your name?" The words came out his mouth smoothly. This relaxed the young girl. She curtsied and looked him in the eye.

"My name is Miku. It is a pleasure to meet you, detective."

"No, the pleasure is all mine. And please, you may address me by my name."

"I understand, Len. Would you like me to show you around?"

"That would be lovely, milady."

A sly smirk rose to his face.
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At that same point in time, a girl with shoulder length blonde locks explored the fancy mansion. Gold trimmings covered the doors and windows, making sure the residents never forgot who owned the mansion.

The girl kept wandering around, until she found a door that was different from the rest. When she opened it, she found stairs leading downstairs.

"Darn..." she mumbled, "I thought it was going to be something cool." The girl made her way back downstairs to the foyer. She planned it out, visit the upper floors, explore the dinning room, and meet the other guests.

"Ah!"

The girl fell on the floor with a flump. "O-Oh! I'm terribly sorry!"

A groan came from in front of her. She fixed her eyes on the person she collided with. It seemed his hat fell off of his head, revealing a messy, yet somehow charming, hair style with a clean ponytail in the back. "No, no. It was my fault. I wasn't looking where I was going."

That's when she noticed his left arm. "Huh? Your arm..."

A chuckle came from the boy. "You noticed. Yes, I have only one arm." The boy slowly got himself up with minor trouble. He held out his hand to the girl and she accepted it, getting back up.

"If I may ask, what might your name be?" The boy asked.

"Rin. Rin Kagamine," Rin responded.

"Len Kagamine. It's a pleasure to meet you, miss."

"Please, don't call me miss. It's too formal!"

Another chuckle. "Alright. Rin then. I'm sorry, but I have to go for a bit. I hope I get to see you again later."

"As do I."

Len made a swift exit, leaving for the stairs Rin had just came down. Rin tilted her head as she watched him leave.

"Strange guy..."
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Len sighed as he knocked on a door. He was sure this was the one. "That girl... I must know more about her."

The door opened and a man with dark blue hair invited him in.

"Ah, Sir Len. Welcome to my manor."
Okay. Oh god. I will update this, I swear. I spent too long on this to just leave it.

Imagine Len with crimson eyes. Now imagine him with cerulean eyes. You realize that you can't choose which one is better, so you say they're both cute. That's my situation right now.

All rights go to CFM and Hinata. Nazotoki and Nazokake shall be the inspiration for this.
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OrangeMellow Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please update soon...?
(person who is obbsessed with "Nazotoki", "Nazokake", "Let me Play the Piano", "Snow is Falling", and "Now, Which?")
:D
And I love the fact that they're adults, not 14-year-olds like they usually are.
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Oz-The-B-Rabbit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
I'll try to update as soon as I can. The second chapter is in post-production. I intend to get it finished before school ends (at least for me, anyway). {I love those songs, too. ^^}

I don't think 14-year-olds are mature enough to handle all the stuff I want to put in here (blood, corpses, torture, etc etc), so I thought them being about 19-21 suited pretty well.
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OrangeMellow Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This info makes me happy~ ^^
It's like,"I'm 14-years-old and I won't even come close to freaking out when I see blood and murder!Oh, and by the way, people take me seriously if I tell them I'm a detective."
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Oz-The-B-Rabbit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Glad it does. ^^

To me, it just doesn't make sense. A 14-year-old, being resistant to death, and also being a detective in the process? That's... kinda of like a Mary Sue, but not exactly... but in a strange way it still is. It's like... saying Kaito had super awesome Chuck Norris powers, but he's only a baby, or something like that.
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OrangeMellow Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know right?
Well, besides the 20-year-old Kaito crying over an ice-cream that he dropped.....XD
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Oz-The-B-Rabbit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Writer
Well, he's Kaito. That doesn't count. XD
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OrangeMellow Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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Fluttershy386 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Milady..Funny word lol
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Oz-The-B-Rabbit Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student Writer
I'm not used to using it, so yeah. ^^ Milady is a funny word, though.
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xTamiTea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
At last - a story that doesn't involve high school. So far, it's interesting and well-written too. I'd love it if you posted it on FF.net so I know when you update, though. I rarely go on dA.

Len's one-arm is a nice touch, as well. It adds some more mystery. Additionally, crimson on Len does sound tempting. A little odd, but tempting. Huh. Kind of scares me, though. Do add another chapter soon! c:
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